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Poetry Writers Out there~~~! idea i wanna share with yous!! Options
ann_kaykay
Posted: Sunday, June 14, 2009 4:54:17 AM

Rank: Junior Next Stepper

Joined: 10/25/2008
Posts: 17
Location: Lansing, Michigan
So I had the craziest idea!
I thought......

"Okay, this is a ongoing topic & all, so why not do something that might or hopefully keep going?"

Well you see, this a idea of mine popped in my head at.....4:40am,
&
yeah I know I should be asleep,
oh well.
Anyways as I was saying,
the idea was:
Why not make a poem?
Not just me writing it,
no
I'm STARTING IT!
Then its up to everyone else to add to it as they like,
comments are good too
All you gotta do is write one to a zillion lines & add to the work. You can change it how you like or go with it.
Only rule is: You have to look deep when you add to it~ ~~!
I wish you lotsa luck~! & We'll title it later









I close my human eyes,
and hear the sweet whispers of the
blue and green land.
She calls me to her warm arms
at her molten, hot core.
The wind blows,
making sighing noises against
the glass of my windows.
The wind asks me to go out there
with them,
the roaring rain,
and angry clouds.






Be Random. Be Creative. Be Amazingly-Omg- Crazy-Great-Fabulous-All-Around-You~!<3 And you will do just fine~~!
wiscosmarty
Posted: Wednesday, June 17, 2009 10:25:03 AM

Rank: Super Next Stepper

Joined: 5/9/2009
Posts: 111
Location: milwaukee, Wisconsin
ann_kaykay wrote:
So I had the craziest idea!
I thought......

"Okay, this is a ongoing topic & all, so why not do something that might or hopefully keep going?"

Well you see, this a idea of mine popped in my head at.....4:40am,
&
yeah I know I should be asleep,
oh well.
Anyways as I was saying,
the idea was:
Why not make a poem?
Not just me writing it,
no
I'm STARTING IT!
Then its up to everyone else to add to it as they like,
comments are good too
All you gotta do is write one to a zillion lines & add to the work. You can change it how you like or go with it.
Only rule is: You have to look deep when you add to it~ ~~!
I wish you lotsa luck~! & We'll title it later









I close my human eyes,
and hear the sweet whispers of the
blue and green land.
She calls me to her warm arms
at her molten, hot core.
The wind blows,
making sighing noises against
the glass of my windows.
The wind asks me to go out there
with them,
the roaring rain,
and angry clouds.

But I refuse,
Nothing can stop can me,
Penetrate my goal,
I am the tree of life,
I stand my ground,
I make sure I'm heard,
You hear my Sound,
You hear my Voice,
you hear me Boom,
I make sure I'm heard,
I stand with presence,
I show POWER,
I will not be moved.




AnImAlS RoCk!!
Heather6
Posted: Wednesday, June 17, 2009 4:30:33 PM

Rank: Junior Next Stepper

Joined: 6/14/2009
Posts: 16
Location: Lynn Haven, Florida
wiscosmarty wrote:
ann_kaykay wrote:
So I had the craziest idea!
I thought......

"Okay, this is a ongoing topic & all, so why not do something that might or hopefully keep going?"

Well you see, this a idea of mine popped in my head at.....4:40am,
&
yeah I know I should be asleep,
oh well.
Anyways as I was saying,
the idea was:
Why not make a poem?
Not just me writing it,
no
I'm STARTING IT!
Then its up to everyone else to add to it as they like,
comments are good too
All you gotta do is write one to a zillion lines & add to the work. You can change it how you like or go with it.
Only rule is: You have to look deep when you add to it~ ~~!
I wish you lotsa luck~! & We'll title it later









I close my human eyes,
and hear the sweet whispers of the
blue and green land.
She calls me to her warm arms
at her molten, hot core.
The wind blows,
making sighing noises against
the glass of my windows.
The wind asks me to go out there
with them,
the roaring rain,
and angry clouds.

But I refuse,
Nothing can stop can me,
Penetrate my goal,
I am the tree of life,
I stand my ground,
I make sure I'm heard,
You hear my Sound,
You hear my Voice,
you hear me Boom,
I make sure I'm heard,
I stand with presence,
I show POWER,
I will not be moved.

But being stubborn is a deadly sin,
and those trees,
most unwilling to bend,
are the first to break.
There's a "crack"
and I feel my approaching demise.
So lucky is my willow friend,
with springy branches,
blowing in the wind.






Umm... I'm really quite shy when writing poetry, and i don't do it often.... so if you don't like what i put you can delete it.



Heather
JASMINEDB
Posted: Wednesday, June 17, 2009 5:03:19 PM

Rank: New Next Stepper

Joined: 6/16/2009
Posts: 1
Location: THORNTON, Colorado
I write at awkward times too!! good to know I'm not alone. There's something about insomnia that makes me pick up a pen and my thought book.
wiscosmarty
Posted: Thursday, June 18, 2009 9:29:00 PM

Rank: Super Next Stepper

Joined: 5/9/2009
Posts: 111
Location: milwaukee, Wisconsin
Heather6 wrote:
wiscosmarty wrote:
ann_kaykay wrote:
So I had the craziest idea!
I thought......

"Okay, this is a ongoing topic & all, so why not do something that might or hopefully keep going?"

Well you see, this a idea of mine popped in my head at.....4:40am,
&
yeah I know I should be asleep,
oh well.
Anyways as I was saying,
the idea was:
Why not make a poem?
Not just me writing it,
no
I'm STARTING IT!
Then its up to everyone else to add to it as they like,
comments are good too
All you gotta do is write one to a zillion lines & add to the work. You can change it how you like or go with it.
Only rule is: You have to look deep when you add to it~ ~~!
I wish you lotsa luck~! & We'll title it later









I close my human eyes,
and hear the sweet whispers of the
blue and green land.
She calls me to her warm arms
at her molten, hot core.
The wind blows,
making sighing noises against
the glass of my windows.
The wind asks me to go out there
with them,
the roaring rain,
and angry clouds.

But I refuse,
Nothing can stop can me,
Penetrate my goal,
I am the tree of life,
I stand my ground,
I make sure I'm heard,
You hear my Sound,
You hear my Voice,
you hear me Boom,
I make sure I'm heard,
I stand with presence,
I show POWER,
I will not be moved.

But being stubborn is a deadly sin,
and those trees,
most unwilling to bend,
are the first to break.
There's a "crack"
and I feel my approaching demise.
So lucky is my willow friend,
with springy branches,
blowing in the wind.

And never lonely is the wind,
Passing every green and brown,
Respected by light and day,
And yet when still...
The earth is in its grasp,
Until again it goes,
Until again it stays,
It holds us frigid and dry,
Leaves us LONELY and WEAK..





Umm... I'm really quite shy when writing poetry, and i don't do it often.... so if you don't like what i put you can delete it.
Your part is awesome..u shouldnt b discouraged!! it would b more awesome though if more ppl wuld add to it and we had like this super long poem and got it published..omg!!
p.s. i left it at like a stand still to make ppl thnk..if its to hard u can always switch a few words but cum on take tha challenge lol

AnImAlS RoCk!!
Midnite
Posted: Wednesday, June 24, 2009 2:38:33 PM

Rank: Starting Next Stepper

Joined: 6/21/2009
Posts: 10
Location: Leakesville, Mississippi
Until the time
The wind she moves
 Blowing in a different direction
Smoting the face of fate
And showing
 She can stand
She can leave Mother Earth
Even though
She has left it torn behind
She has not yet met
Her demise










 hey guys i dk if this fits or not...u can delete it if it doesn't
ann_kaykay
Posted: Friday, July 03, 2009 11:56:06 PM

Rank: Junior Next Stepper

Joined: 10/25/2008
Posts: 17
Location: Lansing, Michigan
it fits perfectly!

Be Random. Be Creative. Be Amazingly-Omg- Crazy-Great-Fabulous-All-Around-You~!<3 And you will do just fine~~!
wiscosmarty
Posted: Friday, July 10, 2009 4:21:11 PM

Rank: Super Next Stepper

Joined: 5/9/2009
Posts: 111
Location: milwaukee, Wisconsin
i know i luv it so much u shuld eneter it in the writing contest!

AnImAlS RoCk!!
ann_kaykay
Posted: Sunday, July 19, 2009 6:28:01 PM

Rank: Junior Next Stepper

Joined: 10/25/2008
Posts: 17
Location: Lansing, Michigan
How?

Be Random. Be Creative. Be Amazingly-Omg- Crazy-Great-Fabulous-All-Around-You~!<3 And you will do just fine~~!
wiscosmarty
Posted: Saturday, July 25, 2009 5:29:43 PM

Rank: Super Next Stepper

Joined: 5/9/2009
Posts: 111
Location: milwaukee, Wisconsin
just add it in the shout out contest lke the writing portion just create a new topic and write the poem simple as that
ann_kaykay wrote:
How?


AnImAlS RoCk!!
ann_kaykay
Posted: Wednesday, July 29, 2009 7:44:42 PM

Rank: Junior Next Stepper

Joined: 10/25/2008
Posts: 17
Location: Lansing, Michigan
Thank you

Be Random. Be Creative. Be Amazingly-Omg- Crazy-Great-Fabulous-All-Around-You~!<3 And you will do just fine~~!
RainCloudsLovePotions
Posted: Saturday, August 01, 2009 12:09:13 PM

Rank: Starting Next Stepper

Joined: 7/31/2009
Posts: 5
Location: Harrison, Arkansas
The lonely one
Wandering this desicrated piece
Of barren earth
Where have the elements gone?
Hydrogen and oxygen
Mixing together
Into nothing of importance.


"Be who you are, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."
-Dr. Suess


Oh what's that? You don't LIKE me? That's ok...because I never LOVED you!!
ellieG
Posted: Wednesday, August 05, 2009 6:09:10 PM

Rank: Starting Next Stepper

Joined: 2/17/2009
Posts: 8
Location: Marietta, Georgia
this is kul! i like 2 write too (not so much poetry tho; sorry)and for the writers' block thing heres a gr8 website: creativewritingprompts.com

"There's no such thing as perfect pple. Theres no such thing as a perfect life, so come as you are, broken and scarred. Lift up your heart and be amazed, be changed by a perfect God." ~Natalie Grant
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